wheels777
wheels777 HalfDork
8/18/10 7:12 a.m.

My email at work has a 2 year clear out function. As I was reading through the list I ran across this poem that I thought some of you would enjoy. Caution, sometimes the buttons fly off when I am talking about my sons.

Two years ago, Calvin, my son was 14 year old. He wrote this poem “Engine”. The American Library of Poetry published the poem in a book entitled Brilliance. I thought that you would appreciate the work of the next generation of car guy. The poem was a school assignment.

                                Engine
                             By Calvin Nelson

I am sitting in the light brown leather seat,

Silently listening to the beat

Rum rum rum rum rum

Goes the piston fleet

The pistons are like ill-treated steeds,

Only paid by horse feed,

My foot is the master,

And gasoline is all the pistons need.

Then the spark eats their food,

Sending the pistons back down their giant metal tubes,

The engine continues this with every piston,

That is the sound to which I listen.

4cylndrfury
4cylndrfury SuperDork
8/18/10 7:15 a.m.

genius!

SVreX
SVreX SuperDork
8/18/10 7:22 a.m.

Hey Andy...

Found one of your buttons on the floor!

You guys are a great family!

Tom Heath
Tom Heath Webmaster
8/18/10 8:56 a.m.

That's pretty awesome. Kudos!

Luke
Luke SuperDork
8/18/10 8:57 a.m.

Nice! It has a great rhythm to it.

4cylndrfury
4cylndrfury SuperDork
8/18/10 9:02 a.m.

I like the poem
I think your son is quite smart
car sounds are such fun!

Kia_racer
Kia_racer HalfDork
8/18/10 9:05 a.m.

Very cool, a poet and a car guy at the same time.

81gtv6
81gtv6 GRM+ Memberand HalfDork
8/18/10 9:13 a.m.

Very cool.

jamscal
jamscal Dork
8/18/10 9:14 a.m.

4cylndrfury reconfirms his Ultradork status.

pigeon
pigeon HalfDork
8/18/10 2:07 p.m.
4cylndrfury wrote: I like the poem I think your son is quite smart car sounds are such fun!

LOL! I love a good haiku.

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