codrus (Forum Supporter) said:
AClockworkGarage said:
I am very apprehensive about this. I've watched the trailer a few times now and there are a few things that worry me.
The thing to remember is that the trailer is a trailer. It's a 90 second advertisement for a TV series intended to create buzz, and that's far too short a time to focus on things like story or character development. Trailers almost always focus on splashy visuals, even for productions that are primarily about other things.
So... we'll see. There's a good chance they'll screw it up, but it's not guaranteed yet.
Even still. Let's say we had a well put together story with interesting characters. I'd do a trailer with a treatment/script like the following.
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Open with an old transistor radio playing a 50's pop song. Maybe Billie Holiday singing "Blue Moon". Suddenly a booted foot (maybe power armor?) steps on and crushes the radio.
Voice over by Ron Pearlman (or someone else with sufficient gravely gravitas): "War."
Shot of someone running away from something off camera and getting shot in the back.
Voice over: "War never changes."
Montage of action sequences showing at least three factions. A bomber with a Chinese flag dropping bombs. Skeletons. Husks of buildings in abandoned settlements. Someone in a suit of power armor getting blown up by a mortar.
Cut to a blindingly brite light. As it slowly fades we see the outline of a fault door with a person silhouetted in front, their hand held up shielding their eyes.
Cut to the outside of the vault and a foot breaking the plane of the vault entrance, but no shot of who it is yet.
Voiceover of vault overseer explaining why this person is leaving (exile, foolishness, "We need you to...")
More action scenes. Another shot of the person walking through a ruined town with only the sound of their feet crunching on dead twigs and maybe a broken bone. We see fleeting movement within the shadow of a building, but not enough clarity to make out what it is.
Voiceover of a ghoul lit by a fire that says something to the effect of, "Well, smooth-skin, I guess this choice is your's. Who are we going to save, and who are you going to abandon." Cut to our protagonist and we finally see their face, grimy with dried blood. They look exhausted and overwhelmed by the weight. They close their eyes, take a deep breath, and open them with a look of determination.
Buddu-duh-Buddu-duh - more action montage.
Shot of an antagonist from a low camera angle. They say something sinister about "Doing what is necessary," or "Bringing order to chaos", or something else similarly grandiose but sinister.
Mushroom cloud.
"War. Never. Changes."
Title Card:
"Fallout. Coming to Amazon [date]."